Presses her points in a coherent order, moving from explaining how bodies are controlled when they reach childbearing age to why there are differences between the treatment of women's and men's bodies during this period. At the end of the paper he summarizes his argument and suggests that a change may occur. When discussing the relationships between law, feta health, and parenting, she provides specific examples of laws that support her position that the legal system favors women as reproductive organisms (such as the Workplace Lead Control Regulation that works against all women in reproductive age). The evidence chosen is well chosen as it relates directly to the points made by Sheldon and includes the opinions of other scholars as well as his own thoughts on each example he presents. Sheldon cites his sources very thoroughly, which leads me to believe that his evidence comes from legitimate sources and convinces me even more that his argument is based on