I struggled to write this article because I had trouble understanding the book itself. I think it was so difficult because we read the books at home alone and I had trouble understanding some of the pictures. Along with the detailed advice, I also received comments on the use of commas. With this sheet I had deleted the commas and the places where commas were added. When I received my final draft I only found one comma error. After seeing Mrs. Hughes' marks where the commas should be, I learned and improved them in my final document. Next, with my advertising analysis paper, I commented on my integration of secondary sources into my draft. This document required many external sources. With many of them I had difficulty integrating citations correctly throughout my article and works cited page. I also had a few errors in my writing, but nothing major to correct. After receiving the comments, I made changes and got a great grade on an assignment that caused me so much stress. Through this article I have made improvements in citing my sources both on the cited page of my works and in the way of integrating them into the text. Last but not least was my favorite personal narrative article to write about. I liked this one better because I felt I had more freedom to write than